I pierce through you with my steely eyes
I hush you up and silence your cries
I punish and criticize you, for all that you lag
I walk away and leave you holding the bag
Your vigilence cannot protect you from me
For I am superior to everything you could ever be
Your only existence is a step on my ladder
I'm more wicked and twisted than the old mad hatter
I'll suck out your soul and leave you lifeless and dead
And put noxious and tainted ideas into that tiny little head
But when I lay you down at night and whisper into your ear
Will you remember my little one, that I'm everything you fear?
RE: Never could title this feeling
Mon, Feb 8, 2010 at 8:13 PM by starsbetween3spooky! i like it!
RE: Never could title this feeling
Sun, Jun 13, 2010 at 3:34 PM by TheUnexpectedGalname it Unfeared.
RE: Never could title this feeling
Sun, Jun 13, 2010 at 3:49 PM by Goll 65thats messed up. is this directed at a child it sounds abusive. I hope u didnt get treated this way, but i really hope u are not treating someone else this way especially a kid. please clear me up if i m totally off base
RE: Never could title this feeling
Sun, Jun 13, 2010 at 4:12 PM by Scott FreeNah, I don't think so. Sounds more like a dysfunctional relationship she has moved away from. Not bad.
RE: Never could title this feeling
Mon, Jun 14, 2010 at 9:37 AM by SilverLinedRE: Never could title this feeling
Tue, Jun 15, 2010 at 7:51 AM by SilverLinedI wrote this poem some time ago. I guess I have trouble naming the things I write, as my emotions are what spills on to the page instead of properly placed words explained away by neat little titles. We all find a way to deal with the things in our lives and since I am someone who bares the pain instead of passing it on, this is my way of dealing. I have grown to appreciate it all though, as it really is the shit in our lives that calls us to stand up and become the beautiful people we are! Sorry it's not more cheery, I've never been that good at those! Enjoy ;)